The Vacuum Cleaner that was Too Powerful

I've finished another chapter for my book of short stories 'Evil Machines' and thought I'd share with you all. CLick the link below and you should end up there:

The Vacuum Cleaner that was Too Powerful

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http://www.unbound.co.uk/books/1/updates/17

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Tanya_Birklid19: I guess I can comment again on how awesome this chapter was :) I'm so looking forward to it being finished!

Paute at 3:39 pm July 14

I hope the same!!
We need another 24% in 6 days. I'm using blogs, tumblr, twitter, facebook... ALL to promote him!!

French Taunter at 3:57 pm July 14

Ok there are Agents or edition houses who do it already, but if you are glad to work for free do it! ;) Only by evoquing/saying the name of the group he'd belong to, is a lot of promotion already.
I don't want to destroy any hope, but to me working for someone means money or to be pay with food in an expensive restaurant with the person you work fo (For Example: I work in french television this year, what do you think my assistants/helpers would say if they do not get pay? Or if I did not?
Of course it can be funny to help, but I hope to get a good reward for it! ;]). I understand that no one is the same and do what they think good to do in their own life. :) that is just an advice and another way of seeing this matter.

French Taunter at 3:56 pm July 14

Ok there are Agents or edition houses who do it already, but if you are glad to work for free do it! ;) Only by evoquing/saying the name of the group he'd belong to, is a lot of promotion already.
I don't want to destroy any hope, but to me working for someone means money or to be pay with food in an expensive restaurant with the person you work fo (For Example: I work in french television this year, what do you think my assistants/helpers would say if they did not get pay? Or if I did not?
Of course it can be funny to help, but I hope to get a good reward for it! ;]). I understand that no one is the same and do what they think good to do in their own life. :) that is just an advice and another way of seeing this matter.

Here Comes Another One: Oh, I laughed so much! Just the wording of some parts had me in stitches. I love the idea of the mops and buckets paddling up the Thames! Can't wait for the rest of the book!

TheRealGilliamFan: I felt very sad for that discarded old broom :'(

Galahad: I've never had much luck with vacuum cleaners, and it all makes so much sense now! It was a hilarious read. Haha, every time I read the word 'vacuum' I heard Graham Chapman's voice saying it in my head from the Woody and Tinny Words sketch.

mrsCutout: Haha what a nice ending!!! Ironic! Loved it! Must get the book soon!
Our previous vacuum was something like this one...only less evil!

mrsCutout: Well I am not patient enough and god knows when I'll lay hands on the book so I'll read it right now! Wow! The excitement!

TheLateColonelVolestranglerBracketsMrs: Tempted as I am to read it now, I'm going to be very patient and wait for the book itself. Just pledged, and I'm very much looking forward to the finished product.

Mrs Attila the Hun 93 at 12:20 pm July 11

Same here. I don't want to spoil it for myself before it's released as much as I really want to read it ... Okay, I admit, I did get up to the bit where the vacuum eats up the duvet, but I then had to force myself not to read more.

I shall sit and wait ... and meditate. Hmm, that's rhymes :D

nope_ive_been_shopping at 1:57 pm July 11

I've only just found a copy of your Fairy Tales book, I'll need to finish that first :)
PS - it is a beautiful rhyme, Mrs A :)

Mrs Attila the Hun 93 at 2:24 pm July 11

Aww, you make one blush XD I have the fairy tale book, too, I got it free with some cereal ... if I remember correctly, or was that a dream?

Tell me, have you been shopping lately?

nope_ive_been_shopping at 3:20 pm July 12

Nope, although lately I have been shopping :)

Mrs Attila the Hun 93 at 12:54 pm July 14

Did you buy anything? :)

French Taunter: Oh Please, Read it again!!!

katithepythonfan: Wow, thank you sir! That absolutely Made My Day!

katithepythonfan at 9:10 am July 14

After a second reading I was still impressed enough to upgrade my level...

Julyful: I just read the story and I very, very liked it!!! Keep on this good work! But I still don't know how this unbound site works..